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Kayla Michelle Miller's avatar

Dale is a real poetic, that's for sure. 🤣 This was hilarious!! My favorite part was the wig situation at the beginning, I could just see him awkwardly struggling and blaming the poor squire for all his troubles. When the disguise ultimately failed, I lost it. 🤣 Great job with this!! I would read love to see more tales about Dale and the squire one day. Medieval tomfoolery at its best haha.

Ricky Champagne's avatar

I love a good disguise, especially when they go wrong. Thanks for the support and reading. I definitely think I'll be doing some more of these two goofballs.

Kayla Michelle Miller's avatar

For some reason, I never thought about having any of my characters wear a disguise, but I'm definitely looking for an opportunity now haha. And of course! Your writing has been one of my favorites I've found here, each one has gave me a good laugh. I do laugh at everything, but you unlocked the snort laugh. That one's special.

I'm thrilled! Can't wait to see what they manage to get into next. 🤣

Ricky Champagne's avatar

The snort laugh is the highest of praises. Thanks so much, Kayla.

Now I’m rooting for a disguise opportunity to show up in one of your stories. I can picture it: Borph trying to order fried chicken while wearing something he thinks is most human-like.

Kayla Michelle Miller's avatar

Yes, Borph is exactly the guy I had in mind for a disguise!! Just a warning, he has some unique opinions about food on Earth, but they aren't nearly as strong as mine lol.

xtrole's avatar

This one had me laughing a lot, lol. I love how Dale blames the squire for their cover having been blown. 🤣🤣🤣 An excellent part 2 for these 2 guys! 💯

Ricky Champagne's avatar

Dale has a rare talent for finding anyone else to blame. Great to hear you enjoyed it.

Parker McCoy's avatar

"Good day." Hehe. That gave me a chuckle. I like Dale and the squire and their antics. The legend of Dale may grow but it will probably take a while. Haha. Great stuff, Ricky.

Ricky Champagne's avatar

I think you’re right, but he’s a firm believer in himself. Thanks a lot for reading and sharing. Good day, Parker.

Rebekah Mallory's avatar

I love these two. They’re hilarious. 😆

Ricky Champagne's avatar

So glad you liked these goofballs and their petty schemes. Appreciate you reading!