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Ninjastroni's avatar

This is a great description, "Riverborn drifted around him in postcard fragments."

And that third unnecessary twirl of the line is classic. 😄

Ricky Champagne's avatar

Barrett believes the river demands a show. And he's gonna give it to them. Thanks for reading.

Rebel St. James's avatar

You’re just a genuinely good writer— you’re *really* good at painting a scene. Thanks for sharing this one, Mr. Champagne 🥂

Ricky Champagne's avatar

Too kind, Rebel. Small coastal town, ridiculous premise, it's a fun one to write. Thanks for reading and the kind words.

Eric Patterson's avatar

Fun story of Booze, Fried Chicken and Over confidence! What could go wrong...

Ricky Champagne's avatar

Riverborn tourism at its finest. Thanks for reading.