The suspense was great. I really thought this was the one! Well done. It's nice to know that when things go bad for Blue he can always make lemonade out of lemons.
And the Blue Banshee fails again. LOL. I like him getting this new job and everything, though. His carnival adventures should be fun until he gets that first victim. Because he will. I swear it. He's definitely going to. They will soon know his wrath. Awesome job as always, Ricky.
Much appreciated! This new chapter at the carnival should provide plenty of chances! Definitely a fun spot for Blue Banshee to get that first win. Thanks for reading and sharing. Grateful for the support.
The suspense was great. I really thought this was the one! Well done. It's nice to know that when things go bad for Blue he can always make lemonade out of lemons.
Lol lemonade out of lemons was almost the title of this one! So funny.
Yeah this was a close one. Those blasted low hanging tunnel walls.
Maybe next time. Thanks for reading!
"...whatever sails your snails"
HAH! Good one. This one had some very good descriptive moments and certainly leaves room for plenty of mischief in future episodes.
Much appreciated, Dave! Thanks for reading and commenting.
And you’re right, the fairgrounds are a perfect place for Blue Banshee to hone his craft.
Close call 😀
Was a heck a plan, almost well executed. :)
Thanks for reading, Theresa!
And the Blue Banshee fails again. LOL. I like him getting this new job and everything, though. His carnival adventures should be fun until he gets that first victim. Because he will. I swear it. He's definitely going to. They will soon know his wrath. Awesome job as always, Ricky.
Much appreciated! This new chapter at the carnival should provide plenty of chances! Definitely a fun spot for Blue Banshee to get that first win. Thanks for reading and sharing. Grateful for the support.
Great horror flick vibes, Ricky! Poor Blue! Oh well. He's in the right place... maybe! Thanks for the fun read!
Thank you! Was really trying to capture some fun slasher tension.
And you’re right, the fairgrounds should give him plenty of opportunities. Appreciate you reading!
You definitely nailed the slasher tension. You might have to start writing actual horror with another character! LOL!
I was excited for the carnival episode after reading the last one. Didn't disappoint even a bit.
Blue came really close this time!
The carnival is definitely a fun place for Blue to explore. I was excited to move into this next chapter for him.
Thanks for the kind words and for reading!